Dew on the grass


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Dew on the grass

by Suddenci 2020-11-11 14:30

First proxy attempt.
Cha-cha method with a modest Olympus XZ-2. Any comment welcomed.

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JackDesBwa 2020-11-12 10:36

What kind of feedback do you want?
Technically, the alignment is fairly good and the colors & exposition are well balanced. The shallow depth of field does not hurt the 3D viewing experience and the subject is well in focus. There is however a window violation with the grass and with the foreground. The base is probably a bit large too.
I would probably have moved the scene slightly backward so that most of the grass would not be in violation, added some black triangles in the bottom part to create a 3D window in order to mask the remaining violation and certainly cropped tighter in height to reduce the background (and foreground) disparities while highlighting the subject.


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